Student Writing Assessment
Introduction
The following rubric is used to consistently measure the extent to which students have accomplished the learning objectives of the courses in writing.
Since writing skills are the same for all courses, students in EAP 1684, ENC 0025, and ENC 1101 will all use the same rubric but be held to different standards.
However, since the expectations for success are at different levels, measurements of student success will be different as well.
The rubric is broken down into four areas and is meant to measure all learning objectives:
Critical Thinking
Clarity and Organization
Language
Support
Within each area, specific related skills are measured, and the professor scores students based on student accomplishment in each area. The point total is then
added and recorded.
Summary Rubric: The first sheet of the rubric is meant as a summary and a convenience for professors to use while grading student work.
Explanation Rubric: The following four sheets list specific and concrete skill levels that are implied in the summary rubric. The summary rubric, if it is used by
professors, must reflect the specific rubric for each area.
Scoring
To complete the course successfully, students must score the following:
EAP 1684 and ENC0025 students must score 24 points or more
ENC 1101 students must score 34ponts or more
Assessment
Assessment not used to improve writing is useless. The writing scored using the rubric must be kept for one year because statistical information can reveal how
successful students are in various courses, EAP 1684, ENC 0025, and ENC 1101 and in the entire basic writing program. No professorsor studentsnames will be
on any of the essays used to review achievement. Statistics from the previous year can identify success and areas where future effort should be focused. Then
department heads can focus on appropriate areas with adjunct instructors. A web-based resource for each rubric area might be developed in time. Please see your
department head for more information.
Student Writing Assessment (Summary Rubric)
Superior
Good
Competent
Below Expectations
Unacceptable
Critical
Thinking
0-15 points:
______________
Exceptionally developed clear,
logical, focused thesis and
content that anticipates and
responds to an academic
audience’s needs and
assumptions.
13-15 pts.:_____________
Clear, logical thinking and a
focused thesis. Does not always
anticipate or respond to the
needs and assumptions of an
academic audience
10-12 pts.:______________
Thesis addresses the issue
and audience, but is too
broad or too narrow.
Provides only general and
limited explanations that
barely meet the needs of an
academic audience
7-9 pts.:_______________
Thesis is ineffective or missing.
Gaps in logical thinking are
noticeable. Logical questions by a
skeptical academic audience are
not addressed.
4-6 pts.:__________________
Does not follow the assignment
instructions and does not
accomplish the purpose of the
assignment. No evidence of critical
thinking.
0-3 pts.:____________________
Clarity &
Organization
0-10 points:
____________
Method of development implied
in topic sentences is clearly and
consistently followed in all
paragraphs. Transitions and
reinforcement of the main idea
add unity and coherence to the
writing.
9-10 pts.:________________
Although an occasional topic
sentences is missing or
ineffective, the method of
development implied in the
topic sentences is mostly
followed. Transitions and
reinforcement of the main idea
are mostly followed.
7-8 pts.: ________________
Topic sentences do not
express clear direction.
Transitions and
reinforcement of the main
idea are minimal, forcing the
reader to make some
connections that should be
made by the writer.
5-6 pts.:________________
Topic sentences are sometimes
present, but most are missing or
ineffective. Development is
aimless, transitions mostly
missing, and the main idea is not
reinforced. The academic
audience cannot follow the logical
thread of the argument most of
the time.
3-4 pts.:___________________
Topic sentences missing or methods
of development implied by topic
sentences are not followed.
0-2 pts.:____________________
Language
0-15 points:
______________
Standard grammar and
punctuation are followed.
Frequently uses specific,
concrete words and phrases that
noticeably add believability and
sophistication to the writing.
Formal tone is consistently used.
13-15 pts.:_____________
Standard grammar and
punctuation are mostly
followed. Uses enough specific,
concrete words and phrases
that make the writing
believable. Formal tone is
consistently maintained.
10-12 pts.:______________
Some repeated grammar and
punctuation errors distract
readers. Uses too many
general words and phrases.
Occasionally uses informal
tone not appropriate to an
academic audience.
7-9 pts.:_______________
Many and varied grammar, and
punctuation errors throughout the
paper make the writing difficult to
understand. Many filler words
used that do not add content or
credibility. Mostly informal tone
is not appropriate to an academic
audience.
4-6 pts.:__________________
Errors in grammar and punctuation
are so frequent that the reader
cannot follow the logic of most
sentences. General and filler words
make the writer and writing not
credible to an academic audience.
Writing is consistently too informal
for an academic audience.
0-3 pts.:____________________
Support
0-10 points:
_____________
Uses ample specific and concrete
facts, examples, and/or
narration. Introduces valid and
believable outside sources, uses
correct in-text citations for
summaries and quotes.
Bibliography, if required, is
correct.
9-10 pts.:________________
Uses some concrete facts
and/or narration but credibility
would be improved with more
specific, concrete details and
examples. Missing minor parts
of in-text documentation.
Bibliography, if required, is
mostly correct.
7-8 pts.: ________________
Some general facts, examples,
and/or narration reduce the
credibility to an academic
audience. Does not introduce
outside sources consistently.
Missing or inconsistent use of
in-text documentation.
Bibliography, if required, is
somewhat flawed.
5-6 pts.:________________
Offers little or no concrete facts.
Generalities make the writing not
credible or convincing to an
academic audience. Includes
many, significant errors with
introductions to outside sources,
in-text citations, summaries, and
quotes. Bibliography, if required,
is mangled or incomplete.
3-4 pts.:___________________
Evidence provided does not conform
to the purpose of the paper or the
assignment. Outside sources are not
credible. Bibliography, if required, is
missing. Blatantly plagiarized.
0-2 pts.:____________________
Total: ________
Student Writing Assessment – Critical Thinking (Explanation Rubric)
Comments
(Specific and individual concerns can be addressed here, such a non-native language errors, etc.)
Superior (A)
Good (B)
Competent (C)
Below Expectations (D)
Unacceptable (F)
Exceptionally developed clear
and focused thesis and content
appropriate to the purpose of
the assignment.
Ample evidence of logical
thinking.
Anticipates and responds to
the academic audience’s
knowledge and assumptions.
Evidence of successful
evaluation of the quality of
outside source(s) is reflected
in the writing
13-15 points______
Developed clear and focused
thesis and content appropriate
to the purpose of the
assignment.
Definite evidence of logical
thinking.
Some relevant facts and
assumptions behind the thesis
are not explored or explained
clearly or thoroughly.
Evidence of general evaluation
of the quality of outside
source(s) reflected in the
writing
10-12 points______
Thesis noticeably too broad,
too narrow or not
appropriate to the purpose of
the assignment.
Some evidence of logical
thinking.
Relevant facts and
assumptions behind the
writing are explained using
only general and limited
explanation.
Some evidence of evaluating
the outside source(s) is
reflected in the writing
7-9 points______
Thesis is either ineffective or
missing.
No evidence of logical thinking.
No recognition of the relevant
facts and assumptions behind
the writing.
Shows no evidence of
evaluating outside source(s)
4-6 points_______
Does not follow the
assignment instructions
and does not accomplish
the purpose of the
assignment.
No evidence of critical
thinking.
0-3 points _______
Student Writing Assessment Clarity and Organization (Explanation Rubric)
Comments
(Specific and individual concerns can be addressed here, such a non-native language errors, etc.)
Superior
Good
Competent
Below Expectations
Unacceptable
Establishes a logical
organization that is easy for
readers to follow.
Noticeably uses effective
topic sentences that establish
a clear direction for the
paragraph, usually at the
beginning of paragraphs.
Methods of development
implied in topic sentences are
clearly and consistently
followed in all paragraphs.
Uses transitions to lead the
reader through the text of
each paragraph.
Regularly reinforces central
idea to create unity and
coherence throughout the
writing.
9-10 points_____
Establishes a logical
organization that is easy for
readers to follow.
Most topic sentences
establish a clear direction
for the paragraph, but an
occasional topic sentence is
either ineffective or missing.
Methods of development
implied in topic sentences
are mostly followed.
Uses transitions most of the
time to lead the reader
through the text of each
paragraph.
Occasionally reinforces the
central idea to create unity
and coherence.
7-10 points______
Does not consistently follow
the implied organization.
Topic sentences exist for most
paragraphs, but many do not
express a clear direction for
the paragraph.
Methods of development
implied in topic sentences are
mostly followed.
Uses transitional words and
phrases infrequently forcing
the reader to look for logical
connections that should be
made more clear.
Minimally emphasizes the
main idea.
5-6 points______
Organization not clearly
understood or not followed.
Topic sentences are sometimes
present, but most are missing
or ineffective.
Does not consistently follow
the methods of development
implied in topic sentences.
Lacks transitional words and
phrases to the point that
reader is unable to follow the
logic of the writing most of the
time.
Does not reemphasize the
main ideas.
3-4 Points_____
Uses little or no coherent
organization throughout
the paper. The ideas
expressed are confusing,
unclear, or do not make
sense to the reader.
0-2 Points______
Student Writing Assessment Language (Explanation Rubric)
Comments
(Specific and individual concerns can be addressed here, such a non-native language errors, etc.)
Superior
Good
Competent
Below Expectations
Unacceptable
Uses standard English
grammar, mechanics,
spelling, and punctuation.
Uses words that add specific,
descriptive content. Avoids
unnecessary, generalized
fillers. Uses stylistic
techniques that add
emphasis, sophistication, and
polish.
Maintains formal tone for
academic writing by using
third person references. Does
not use intimate second
person references (“you”).
13-15 points______
Uses standard English
grammar, mechanics,
spelling, and punctuation.
Includes specific, descriptive
content, but occasionally
uses general words or
phrasing.
Maintains formal tone for
academic writing by using
third person references.
Does not use intimate
second person references
(“you”).
10-12 points______
Includes a few repeated
grammar, mechanics, spelling,
and punctuation errors
throughout the paper.
Repetitive sentence structure.
Relies on too many general
words and phrases, despite
some specific words and
phrases.
Occasionally uses an informal
tone or point of view that is
not appropriate to academic
writing.
7-9 points______
Includes many and varied
grammar, mechanics, spelling,
and punctuation errors
throughout the paper, making
the writing difficult to
understand.
Repetitive sentence structure.
Contains excessive filler words
that add no content.
Uses a mix of personal
references that makes the
writing neither informal nor
formal enough for academic
writing.
4-6 points_______
Includes many grammar,
mechanics, spelling, and
punctuation errors
throughout the paper,
making the writing very
difficult or impossible to
understand.
Repetitive sentence
structure. Contains
excessive filler words that
add no content.
Uses tone and language
throughout the writing
that are not appropriate to
academic writing.
0-3 points _______
Student Writing Assessment Support (Explanation Rubric)
Comments
(Specific and individual concerns can be addressed here, such a non-native language errors, etc.)
Superior
Good
Competent
Below Expectations
Unacceptable
Uses ample specific and
concrete facts, examples,
and/or narration that explain
or support the central idea,
thereby giving credibility to
the writing and the writer.
Introduces summaries,
quotes, and/or references to
outside sources.
Consistently and correctly
uses in-text citations.
Supplies correct bibliography
if required by the assignment.
9-10 points_____
Uses some concrete facts
and/or narration that
explain or support the
central idea, but the
credibility of the writing
would be improved with
more specific details and
concrete examples.
Occasionally does not
introduce summaries,
quotes, and/or references to
outside sources.
Consistently and correctly
uses in-text citations with
few or minor errors.
Small errors exist in a
bibliography if required by
the assignment.
7-10 points______
Needs more specific, concrete
facts, examples, and/or
narration to support the
central idea. Supporting facts
are too general throughout
most of the writing, making
the writer and the writing less
credible.
Does not introduce outside
sources consistently.
Includes some errors with in-
text citations, summaries,
quotes and/or references to
outside sources.
Bibliography, if required, does
not substantially follow
correct format.
5-6 points______
Offers few or no facts, and/or
narration to support the
central idea. Because of the
generalities, the writing and
the writer are not convincing
Includes many, significant
errors with introductions to
outside sources, in-text
citations, summaries, quotes,
and/or references to outside
sources.
Bibliography, if required, is
substantially mangled or
incomplete. Entries may be
missing
3-4 points_____
Contains no support, or
the support provided is
not appropriate to the
central idea. Writing and
writer are not believable,
yet alone credible.
Does not introduce
outside sources, cite
summaries, provide
quotes, and/or references
to other sources.
Bibliography, if required,
is missing. (Plagiarism).
0-2 points______