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Original Text (Selected Detail In Red) Marker Examples What It Might Look Like
He turned over his stout, well-cared-for
person on the springy sofa, as though he
would sink into a long sleep again; he
vigorously embraced the pillow on the other
side and buried his face in it; but all at once
he jumped up, sat up on the sofa, and
opened his eyes.
✔: We can visualize our prince sleeping and embracing the pillow
comfortably, unaffected.
Why? This shows that he was pretty relaxed, he’s not losing sleep
over the issue. It’s also a pretty easy thing to visualize now that
we know what the sofa looks like (and may have an image for the
prince himself, too).
✗: The prince jumping up from the sofa.
Why? This isn’t the flow of the text - the author clearly wants to
show that the prince wasn’t bothered, and then he was. If there’s
important information about him being alarmed, it’s not in this
paragraph, and we’ll create a marker for it when we come to it.
“Yes, yes, how was it now?" he thought,
going over his dream. "Now, how was it? To
be sure! Alabin was giving a dinner at
Darmstadt; no, not Darmstadt, but
something American. Yes, but then,
Darmstadt was in America. Yes, Alabin was
giving a dinner on glass tables, and the
tables sang, Il mio tesoro—not Il mio tesoro
though, but something better, and there
were some sort of little decanters on the
table, and they were women, too," he
remembered.”
✔: An image of a dream - maybe a cloud above someone’s head,
in which someone is sitting in America doing something clearly in
America, for example they are dining with some famous
American. The author later gives us the details of glass tables, so
we can add those details in to our marker.
Why? This is a difficult paragraph, written in confusing language.
We need to get the full picture of the dream, combined with some
dinner, but we don’t have enough information to visualize what’s
happening at the dinner beyond what’s on the table and who’s
around it. We don’t yet know what details are important - even the
idea that it’s in America may turn out to be unimportant, and so
we have to take our best guess.
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